Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Love - is not singular

Truedessa's Collection











I say hang on to dreams UN-sung
for the final breath is not yet done
for dreams arise in unknown tongue
clouds disappear, revealing bright sun

"Love", the song of a single word
the sweetest sound ever heard

Unfurl thy wings, come soar with me
over the horizon lies a sunburst sky
opening portals, we hold the key
reaching new heights, flying high

"Love", the song of a single word
the sweetest sound ever heard

within the heart, beats a dream
internal flame, igniting  desire
in the orbs of night, light gleams
throw you worries into the fire

"love",  the song of a single word
the sweetest sound ever heard

I say hang on to dreams UN-sung
for the final breath is not yet done
for dreams arise in unknown tongue
clouds disappear, revealing bright sun

sharing with Poet's United - here
writing about a word - I choose "Love"
Thanks for visiting - may the song of
love, always be in your heart!

16 comments:

  1. That had a really great rhythm to it, like a well-played song.

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  2. This is oh so beautiful and soothing :D :D

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  3. A delightful song with haunting rhythm and refrain! I will keep hold of those dreams as yet unsung.

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  4. Best word ever, and a beautiful, joyous poem.

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  5. ah...nothing like Love...you've so beautifully and musically honored the word...

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  6. love is a song. one word and yet so intricate. so many have tried to capture it, but captivity only robs it.

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  7. So much could be left unsung as love's strings are flung, or plucked haha didn't rhyme

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  8. It is the greatest song...love, and this was a fabulous poem! I felt deeply the opening and closing verse...

    'I say hang on to dreams UN-sung
    for the final breath is not yet done
    for dreams arise in unknown tongue
    clouds disappear, revealing bright sun'

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  9. You have tuned into the silent songs!

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  10. Clearly, the song of love lives in your heart Trudessa. I really needed to read this poem today. Thank you.

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  11. You picked the biggest word of all and did it justice!

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  12. So lyrical... of course the best word there is!

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  13. I say yes to the staying power of your unsung dreams fuelled in love

    Much love...

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  14. Very lyrical in its rhythm, lovely read.

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  15. I love that you used your opening as a closing stanza and the refrain is lovely...so melodious!

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